After showing my initial video:
- Good lip syncing with the audio track
- Like the pure performance aspect as it displays the emotion well
- The clothing isn't quite right, as the artist shouldn't be in black as its a song about love
- Performance wise, needs to cut out laughter as artist needs to take it seriously
Advice:
- Re- shoot some scenes where the artist is laughing
- The parts where the camera work is very shaky try and edit out
- For the future, don't let the artist wear black
After I had gained this feedback I could notice what the potential audience were saying and agreed. This made me decide to re do my video as I felt I could do it do a better standard. As I have left my self enough time I will proceed to re film my video
The original video - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lx5g7NYf1fA&feature=youtu.be
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